Max O’Donnell is the main male character in The Cloud Seeker. Moody and profane, he is seemingly incapable of blending into the peaceful English village he has moved to, in order to be with his estranged son.
Yet he does blend in, slowly and inexorably, although his motives for being there remain unclear. As he and Luca grow closer, the relationship Max has with Clair, Luca’s mother, is balanced on a knife-edge. He is no longer interested in her, but even though she is married, to a well-loved garage mechanic and blues guitar player, Clair finds that old flames are being rekindled.
And Cat, demoted from primary carer to convenient childminder, knows that something about Max does not ring true. As she tries to protect Luca from the inevitable clash between his parents, she finds herself reluctantly drawn to the strange New Yorker, despite his language and aggressive stance. He is bad news but then, so is she. And maybe he is just what she needs to kick-start her re-entry into reality, after so long in the shadows of depression and grief.
What follows is a quick insight into how Max sees the world, with snippets taken from the book.
Warning: Profanity
Max has a very cynical outlook on life. His experiences on 9/11 have left him traumatised and unable to grieve for the brother he left under the ruins. Added together with a difficult relationship with his parents and a deep-seated resentment at being obliged to follow in his father’s footsteps, it is not surprising he comes across as being moody and unpredictable.
1. On skinny decaff latte: “That’s a pussy’s drink.”
2. On being normal: “What the hell is that anyway? There’s no such thing.”
3. On dealing with difficult women: “Fuck their brains out and they’ll talk more sense in the morning.”
4. On his mother: “She was a cunt.”
5. On telling Cat how he feels: “You’re the kind of woman that makes a guy want to drop his pants and charge.”
6. On fatherhood: “I’m a complete screw-up. Is that okay?”
7. On living in Chudleigh: “Is everyone in this place batshit crazy? If so, I’m going to fit in just fine.”
8. On Clair’s style of parenting: “You haven’t exactly been a model mother, have you?”
9. On English ale: “Not as good as cocaine and a bad fuck.”
10. On God: “Who?”
Jayne Lockwood Books 
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